Reviews For The Haunted Plea
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Reviewer: storylovinggamer Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/26/17 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Pretty good story. A bit sad. It felt a little bit mechanical though.

Reviewer: 930310 Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 02/26/17 05:05 am Title: Chapter 1

The grammar is in need of editing since tve tempus does change several times and some of the sentences are incomplete or do not make grammatical sense. As for the story itself, having the "heart of a sissy" seems a bit degrading to say since the term itself is a degrading way to refer to an effeminate male.

Reviewer: snowangel Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/24/17 12:44 am Title: Chapter 1

Dauphin you never disappoint. this like all your stories was wonderful.

Reviewer: Maryjane Signed Report
Date: 02/23/17 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

That is one of the sweetest stories I ever had ever read, very teary though.

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