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Reviewer: miara Signed star Report
Date: 04/15/17 12:02 am Title: Chapter 1: What Awaits

couldnt it be even shorter? maybe just a sentence?

Reviewer: ben569 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/06/17 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 1: What Awaits

Brief yet interesting start. I would however pay extra attention to your grammar: you forgot to put several "i"s in caps.

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