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Reviewer: Luthien Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/15/17 11:59 pm Title: Time, Considered as a Curl of Soft Hair

I caught the referenve to the blood immediately after the reveal. And to answer the question posed in the intro -- I would never wish to achieve my wish at the cost of an innocent life. That aspect left me cold, and put a chill on an otherwise fine story.

It also caused me to think that there were other motives here, besides the financial, for the creatures who were the agents of the change. Suddenly I'm thinking "human sacrifice."

Thanks for sharing it with us!

Reviewer: Portia Bennett Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/12/14 09:20 am Title: Time, Considered as a Curl of Soft Hair

And we venture into the twilight zone. Good story.

Reviewer: chefness Signed starstarstarhalf-star Report
Date: 07/20/12 05:11 pm Title: Time, Considered as a Curl of Soft Hair

liked the surreal, dreamlike quality.

Reviewer: Snarfles Signed Report
Date: 06/25/12 01:58 am Title: Time, Considered as a Curl of Soft Hair

k... so where is the original Pandora? Interesting tale to be sure

Author's Response: Well, as I mentioned before, there's a hint toward the end of the story that Fredo put the hit (so to speak) on the original Pandora, thereby getting her out of the way so the "new Pandora" could take over. (I was trying to be subtle, but it may have been too subtle.) It's a bit of a grim twist, but it does obliquely address an issue that many TG stories simply ignore.

Reviewer: Zsuzsi Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/03/12 12:41 am Title: Time, Considered as a Curl of Soft Hair

Nice!

Reviewer: Dwere Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/02/12 09:06 pm Title: Time, Considered as a Curl of Soft Hair

But now that I think of it... what happened to the original Pandora?

Author's Response: It is subtle, true, but there's a hint near the end of the story that Fredo "took care of business" (if you get my drift)...

Reviewer: Dwere Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/02/12 05:39 pm Title: Time, Considered as a Curl of Soft Hair

Nice little end-around on a pending divorce.

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