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Reviewer: Princess_Panty_boy 92646 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/10/17 12:42 am Title: Chapter 1

Thank you for sharing your story. I really enjoyed it. I hope you continue it.
Hugs Princess

Reviewer: Musicat Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/21/17 04:04 am Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful. I loved this story, because, unlike some other stories I've read, it is realistic. No magic witches or rare medical conditions. Just straight up contemporary. Good job!

Reviewer: Hrdknight Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/20/17 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

Enjoyed reading this story, if only the happy ending could really be the norm.

Reviewer: 930310 Signed starstar Report
Date: 01/20/17 07:09 am Title: Chapter 1

Mhm. . Your writing is pretty decent but there are some flaws. The story overall was inconsistent and some parts made no sense.

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