Date: 01/08/18 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm not a fan of ponies. I'm not a fan of male submission. But damn, this story worked from start to finish for me. And the sadder and darker it got, the more I liked it. The utterly pathetic outcome and the feelings of hopelessness, trapped in a new life and new body with no hope, was outstanding (in a horrible way of course). Well done, keep up the good work!
Date: 01/05/17 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Geez Bobby, really, this one was exceptionally horrifying, even for you!
The sad part is all of this most likely does happen (except for the evil doctor's expertise). I read it all the way through In the hopes of see some redemption, but alas there was none to be had... Talia
Date: 01/04/17 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 8
Dont get me wrong this was expertly written but is beyond belief Truly disturbing. Call me lame or or of touch but even a remote glimpse of a happy ending would be nice.
Author's Response: That's for the complement on the writing. It's definitely dark. Obviously, if this were a real life story it would be horrifying, but it's fantasy and I've always been intrigued by how someone would feel when something so utterly horrific and humiliating happened to them that was something they had no control over and were helpless to stop from happening. I don't want to have happy endings every time in my stories, but I do occasionally have them when I finally finish...
Date: 01/03/17 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Always look forward to new stories from you, but I am not a big fan of ponies. Looking forward to more ponyless stories in the future.
Author's Response: Thank you. The pony aspect is more about the horrifying humiliation and lack of control. The restrictive bondage and being unable to help yourself. If you read actual Pony Girl stories they seem to be more about human beings who actually want to be animals. Truth be told, most Pony Girl stories bore me.