Reviews For That Boy
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Reviewer: Vintage Ink Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/25/17 08:01 am Title: Chapter 1

I can't wait. I would go back and clean up some minor grammar mistakes, but other than that, I enjoyed the story.

I'm giving you four stars. Please re-read your first chapter and the few awkward phrases or a missing word will pop so you can fix it.

Thanks, I love female to male stories. You could be inspired by the 80s movie "One of the Guys" where a cute girl falls in love with the character dressed as a boy.

Reviewer: Vintage Ink Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/25/17 07:52 am Title: Chapter 1

Enjoyed how you developed the story. Keep the story going, please!

Reviewer: snowangel Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/28/16 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

wow such a supportive dad :) hope things work our for him. great read

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