Date: 08/25/17 08:01 am Title: Chapter 1
I can't wait. I would go back and clean up some minor grammar mistakes, but other than that, I enjoyed the story.
I'm giving you four stars. Please re-read your first chapter and the few awkward phrases or a missing word will pop so you can fix it.
Thanks, I love female to male stories. You could be inspired by the 80s movie "One of the Guys" where a cute girl falls in love with the character dressed as a boy.