Reviews For Caught by Mommy
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Reviewer: Velomark Signed Report
Date: 06/25/14 10:12 am Title: Chapter 1

The story was fun. I spent entirely too much time fantasizing about what it's be like to be a little girl and get all the frilly lacy awesomely pretty clothes.

Reviewer: Natasa Jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/25/14 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

Keep it going. Don't end it now :(

Reviewer: Deathflower Signed starstarstarhalf-star Report
Date: 11/06/13 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

I liked the start best.

Reviewer: Maryjane Signed Report
Date: 09/18/13 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 2

Mom is really mean the way she grants my wants.

Reviewer: Maryjane Signed Report
Date: 09/18/13 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great story!
By a great author,but are the diapers necessary?

Reviewer: 1991marky Signed Report
Date: 09/11/12 12:56 am Title: Chapter 1

This is one of my favorite fiction stories here but I would love to find out where to get some of the clothes you mention in this storie hope you can help and keep up the good fiction stories

Reviewer: Tatiana Brigozavich Signed starstar Report
Date: 08/03/12 01:17 am Title: Chapter 1

I am very impressed at the thought that went into this story as well as the use & placement of images. ; )

Reviewer: Snarfles Signed Report
Date: 06/17/12 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

cute story, guess Kelly(ie) got what (s)he dreamed of. I'm glad you had fun writing this first draft 'Caught with consequences' is the basis of most sit-coms. Please spend some time proofreading prior to posting; spell check can't tell the difference between then and than, can't tell when a sentence says the exact opposite of what you intended, and has no idea of when one character speaks and then another. That's up to you to do. Keep in mind that some of your characters are very young, and as such the vocabulary and speaking pattern should reflect that.

Reviewer: Gene Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/23/12 12:40 am Title: Chapter 1

10/10. Loved every second of this.

Reviewer: Baby_Girl_69ing Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/18/12 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 2

Loved your story the pics made it even more fun to read

thank you

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