Reviews For Project 1
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Reviewer: the Morrigan Signed Report
Date: 11/12/18 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nice beginning, though I'm curious as to how the narrator could know the pink liquid in the syringes is thick without seeing it move or drip, and before feeling it injected.

That's a minor concern, though. I'll be watching this one closely.

Reviewer: ben569 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/28/16 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great start but curious to see what's coming next :)

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