Reviews For Dorm for One
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Reviewer: Natasa Jacobs Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/05/19 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 6 - The Makeover

LOL looks like she's stuck and is going to be a girl after all. Should have thought this through. What next be forced to have the surgery to show the school she isn't lying?

Next chapter please

Reviewer: Natasa Jacobs Signed Report
Date: 03/05/19 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Moving Day

Still not sure if this will work. Wait that's what I said in my mind and what Tim said as well.

Reviewer: Natasa Jacobs Signed Report
Date: 03/05/19 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Woman's Intuition

I knew that he could get caught some how.

Reviewer: Natasa Jacobs Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/05/19 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Shopping

The parents can still see where you go and where you but things on credit card statements.
Kids these days.

Reviewer: Natasa Jacobs Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/05/19 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 2 - You're Serious?

Could work Jeff, but you might get caught

Reviewer: Natasa Jacobs Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/05/19 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Bright Idea

This sounds interesting

Reviewer: noodles5 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/02/17 05:36 am Title: Chapter 1 - The Bright Idea

I actually quite like the pace of this story.. keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Terrigen Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/29/17 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Bright Idea

I glad you brought this story back, please continue.

Reviewer: Fuskybusky Signed Report
Date: 03/22/17 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 2 - You're Serious?

I know you are trying to keep it short but details help alot

Reviewer: Fuskybusky Signed Report
Date: 03/22/17 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 2 - You're Serious?

I know you are trying to keep it short but details help alot

Reviewer: Lanz Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/25/16 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Shopping

Interesting story so far, I like the dialogue usage; it's very similar to my style. Other than a few speling/grammar things, your story is going great.
In chapter two I think you meant liable instead of "lible", and there are a few capitalization errors, but that's all I saw.
Good luck :)

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