Date: 11/25/16 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Women's Intuition
Interesting story so far, I like the dialogue usage; it's very similar to my style. Other than a few speling/grammar things, your story is going great.
In chapter two I think you meant liable instead of "lible", and there are a few capitalization errors, but that's all I saw.
Good luck :)