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Reviewer: shooter130 Signed Report
Date: 12/12/16 08:06 am Title: Chapter 1

So why does Cole have tits anyway? Is he fat or does he have a disorder?

Reviewer: 930310 Signed star Report
Date: 11/23/16 07:20 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh dear... You really need to improve your spelling and grammar. This text is too bad for most people to actually want to bother reading.

Reviewer: Chinro Signed star Report
Date: 11/20/16 05:54 am Title: Chapter 1

The very first word in the title is a spelling error for heavens sake!

I just don't know how you could ever move on without fixing and improving a lot of basic stuff. I don't want to feel like I'm harassing you but there is no other way to say it.

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