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Reviewer: jayme403 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/07/17 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 13 * Meka & John *

after I saw this story here, I read the synopsis, and some reviews, and saw that there were a few other stories in this universe before this one, so I set out to read the rest on fictionmania before starting this one. now that im finished, I have to say, I shed a few tears at the ending. it was a fatastic story, and you are a very talented writer, your writing makes it easy to forget I am reading words at all, and let the action unfold in my imagination.
there are many story threads I can imagine you could pick up in any future stories about John. I beleive John's Wife would already be suspicious, simply by wathing the news reel of John and Meka fighting. she knows he uses a battle rod, and she knows body swaps are possible and that John and Meka have already done it once before. Watching the news, and Seeing John and Meka fighting that battle, and Meka using her husbands battle rod, you have to wonder if she is already wondering just what is going on.
anyways, great story!, and im off to start reading some of your older stories! :)

Author's Response: Jayme403, Thank you so much for the kind review. I can't tell you how much your comments mean to me on this particular story. I'll never forget Brittany and this story was first and foremost for her. I may come back to this Universe someday, but I've got too many other ideas I'm working on now. Cheers - Zapper

Reviewer: rubuttons Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/29/16 01:40 am Title: Chapter 13 * Meka & John *

very good story! Thumbs up!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Cheers Zapper

Reviewer: TG_Obsessed176 Signed Report
Date: 11/22/16 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 1 *Meka*

Hey i was wondering what the stories before this were called, feel like i'm missing back story

Author's Response: The first story was: "On The Run With John and Meka" Then there was an epilogue to that. "On The Run With John and Meka - Epilogue [John's Story]" Then Brittany did an epilogue called: "The Price of Witchraft - Meka's Story" Then in the same universe I wrote a long story and broke it into two parts: "Never Meddle in the Affairs of a Woman". All of those were posted on Fictionmania. However I plan to bring them over here, if there is interest. Meka's story: My author page on FM:

Reviewer: DAW Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/22/16 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 1 *Meka*

A great story and a fitting tribute. It's a shame that this isn't getting more comments. You've really put a great deal of effort into this and it clearly shows.

Author's Response: DAW, thanks for the kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I really think Brittany would have as well. Regardless of comments, or the absence of them, this story has done what I wanted it to do. Brittany-Meka now has something out there that might, over the long march of time, cause someone to pause and wonder; who was Brittany? Why would an amateur writer of TG-Fiction post something like this in her memory? Thank you for reading. Cheers Zapper

Reviewer: TmC Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/21/16 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 12 * Meka & John *

Yea. I love all your stories. I was actually in the middle of rereading your Consultant stories when you posted this. I keep expecting Morgana to pop up here and kick some ass.

Author's Response: Thanks! lol - This is a different Universe. So Morgana isn't here. I'm glad you've been enjoying my work. Cheers Zapper

Reviewer: TmC Signed Report
Date: 11/21/16 04:10 am Title: Chapter 12 * Meka & John *

I've been loving every second of this.
I read the rest over on bigcloset. And it's a pain for me to comment over there.

Great story.

Author's Response: TmC, I post each chapter here and on BCTS at the same time. So if reading and commenting over here works better for you. Please feel free. I just appreciate knowing that someone, anyone is out there reading and enjoying my work. This one is particularly personal. Brittany was a close friend and she would have loved this story. Cheers Zapper

Reviewer: Lailaluvs00 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/18/16 02:06 am Title: Chapter 1 *Meka*

Very good writing as well as a few naughty bits, a rare combination!! ;-)

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment. I'm glad that you're enjoying it. There's plenty more to come! Cheers Zapper

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