Date: 11/12/16 01:57 am Title: Full Story
I quite liked this! I enjoyed the characters and the slow burn of the transformation. It's also a very unique genie story, if only because I'm used to genies granting wishes instantaneously. I believe I've heard that wasn't always the case in the old folktales and legends, but genies have been that way for a while now, so for you to drag out Lenny's wish like that felt fresh. I see that this is your first story. If this level of writing talent is maintained, you'll become an excellent TG writer!
Date: 11/06/16 02:52 pm Title: Full Story
Very nice, well worth the read. Spoiler alert: I had wondered about that other half of the potion. I wasn't disappointed. Reminds me of a SRU story posted here many years ago where a fellow wished he could be a girl's perfect lover. He ended up as her identical twin sister.