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Reviewer: 930310 Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 11/02/16 05:37 am Title: Chapter 1

I believe that you need to edit the synopsis to reflect what this story is about. Also, the pacing seems somewhat inconsistent.

Reviewer: CHRIS2K Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/24/16 01:59 am Title: Chapter 2

i like the idea .good job so far .but story seems to jump around a bitand seems details missing ?But then again i am just an armchair critic .
but you are doing a good job . Thanks

Author's Response: Yeah, sorry, I felt the same writing it but got a bit arrogant and decided to post anyway. Thanks.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/23/16 06:26 am Title: Chapter 1

Pretty good!

Reviewer: Esme Mannequin Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/23/16 03:14 am Title: Chapter 1

I thoroughly look forward to more

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