Date: 11/07/16 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
Interesting premise, and a nice story.
The only glitch is the use of quotation marks - I'm not sure how they got formatted the way they are - with the leading quotes at the bottom of the line. But it doesn't overly distract from the story.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading the story and reviewing it. I don't know what to do about the quotation mark. I have tried and cant fix the problem.