Reviews For The Devil Within
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Reviewer: the Morrigan Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/03/18 05:16 pm Title: The Demon Within

Would have been much better as a novella or even a novel, as this treatment kind of glosses over the viewpoint character's mental changes along with the events that caused and deepened those changes. Still, this is both hot and well-written.

Except the castration. Blegkh. ;)

Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/26/16 04:09 am Title: The Demon Within

Well that was...something else. I'm glad that someone is finally sticking it to r/TheRedPill/Pick Up Artist/meninist type assholes, and I enjoyed the occult aspect you introduced.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/20/16 11:42 am Title: The Demon Within

An interesting and good story!

Reviewer: RemiTF Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/19/16 07:37 pm Title: The Demon Within

Crossdressing/TV isn't my cup of tea, but this story was novel, fun, and well-written. It was just the right length, and had a satisfying conclusion.

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