Reviews For Daddys girl
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Reviewer: Ktech Signed Report
Date: 11/07/16 01:27 am Title: Chapter 1

Horrible grammar, there is no paragraphs making it hard to read, very cheesy, and not explained well. You need to give details about what's going on, instead you're just rushing through everything and not completing your sentences properly. I don't want to be rude, but this is what I see and it doesn't make me want to read it.

Reviewer: Ktech Signed Report
Date: 11/07/16 01:27 am Title: Chapter 1

Horrible grammar, there is no paragraphs making it hard to read, very cheesy, and not explained well. You need to give details about what's going on, instead you're just rushing through everything and not completing your sentences properly. I don't want to be rude, but this is what I see and it doesn't make me want to read it.

Reviewer: 930310 Signed star Report
Date: 11/04/16 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

What is this? You really should proofread and quality-check your work before posting it. This kind of writing only leads to you losing a lot of potential readers...

Reviewer: EmilyK Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 10/18/16 02:07 am Title: Chapter 1

Love the content, but your formatting could use work. Paragraph spacing is your friend.

Reviewer: junyour Signed star Report
Date: 10/16/16 11:36 am Title: Chapter 1

A single block of text makes for a difficult read. Learn to paragraph and the story reading might improve.

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