Reviews For Babysitter to baby
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Reviewer: Amybest1991 Signed Report
Date: 01/05/18 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 2

Please continue the story

Reviewer: LoveFox Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/03/17 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 2

I like where this is going.

Reviewer: Viper61277 Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/26/16 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 2

Looks like Cole my be in for a few surprises in the chapters to come

Author's Response: Maybe:)

Reviewer: Hiei_The_Little_Tomboy Signed Report
Date: 10/23/16 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

sounds interessting, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Emily Signed star Report
Date: 09/26/16 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

There were little to no comma's in this story, which made it quite annoying to read. There was hardly any character build up, not much of a plot either. That one inch dick was an odd way to start a story with.

Author's Response: I will try better next time and how do you recommend to give a description of the character for any future stories I write

Reviewer: Emily M Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/24/16 09:18 am Title: Chapter 1

Very good start. Hope you keep going. :)

Author's Response: Thank you and I will soon writing it on paper first

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