Reviews For Losing Control
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Reviewer: Nomda Plume Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/19/19 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 3.5 Kristen's Plan

Ahhhh! You bust out "vibrating panties" and then QUIT!

Just kidding (but not at all).

Would you you to continue this one.

Reviewer: Princess_Panty_boy 92646 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/22/16 03:58 am Title: Chapter 1: The beginning

Nice start hun thank you for sharing your story. I look forward to the next chapter.
Hugs, princess

Author's Response: Thank you princess!! Hugs, Alice

Reviewer: Emily Signed starstar Report
Date: 11/22/16 12:55 am Title: Chapter 1: The beginning

It's not poorly written, the plot is just generic and the chapters are really short.

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. Chapters are only short because honestly I don't have very much time to spend writing

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