Reviews For The Bargain
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Reviewer: RemiTF Signed star Report
Date: 09/30/16 12:58 am Title: 2. Joe becomes Jessica

Don't do that.

This website only notifies people when a 'new' chapter is posted in your story. If you live-update the chapter, the website does not notify anyone; nobody will know when it's done, unless they constantly check back on this specific one.

If you want to safely keep your stories backed up to the cloud, use something like Google Docs. Once the chapter is *complete*, THEN you can post the chapter on the TGStorytime website.

I would recommend just deleting this chapter, since there's nothing here. Post the completed chapter when it's ready.

Reviewer: Maryjane Signed Report
Date: 09/24/16 09:36 pm Title: 2. Joe becomes Jessica

Running out of ideas?

Reviewer: BatJade Signed Report
Date: 09/22/16 02:58 pm Title: 2. Joe becomes Jessica

I don't know if you will write, but you don't need to write "Work on the chapter". If you want to write, so there is End Notes.

Reviewer: Ktech Signed Report
Date: 09/20/16 01:28 am Title: 2. Joe becomes Jessica

Are you serious? Wtf?

Author's Response: Not finished yet!

Reviewer: grabber_blue Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/19/16 11:54 pm Title: 1. Striking a bargain

So you extendend the 1st chapter I don't remember all of that

Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed Report
Date: 09/19/16 11:44 pm Title: 2. Joe becomes Jessica

Umm... is chapter 2 supposed to just be one sentence?

Author's Response: Nope, will be up in a few days

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/18/16 09:57 pm Title: 1. Striking a bargain

Nice start.

Reviewer: grabber_blue Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/17/16 06:38 pm Title: 1. Striking a bargain

Hmmmm interesting. But also might wanna check over your spelling a little there's a spot where I think you meant greatful and not great fun

Author's Response: Fixed, thanks x

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