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Reviewer: TerrieCheerleader Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/05/18 05:25 am Title: Chapter 2

Please continue, it is a great story.

Reviewer: Christina H Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/21/16 07:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Good story and I'm glad that you're continuing

Reviewer: Jessica0016 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/20/16 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

Glad you continue the story Keep up the good work

Reviewer: Southern Belle Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/20/16 11:21 am Title: Chapter 2

There isn't a chance at all CPS or the police or SOMEONE would have stepped in to help long before this. Homeless teens are mostly ignored - which is wrong and I don't mean to sound like I'm condoning that behavior - but a homeless 8-year-old? Someone would have stepped in within a day or two to get said child off the streets ASAP.

That said, once I suspended my disbelief, this is a good start to what hopes will be a good series. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: just wait. things will make sense soon.

Reviewer: Jessica0016 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/18/16 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

I dicided to change it to a 5 for being committed to finishing the story Looking forward to reading the rest

Author's Response: Ashley is also in My Safe Place as a friend To Kiara

Reviewer: Jessica0016 Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/16/16 05:31 am Title: Chapter 1

Great story I hope you continue it

Author's Response: dont worry, I will

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