Date: 09/03/16 04:05 pm Title: The First Experience
I wouldn't have noticed that you're not a native speaker. Your prose is pretty good.
This became really enjoyable with the second chapter and seeing Christy trying to adapt to the first of her hopefully many new lives. Obviously this life is quite lewd, but I'm excited to see what other ones she slips into as well, or to see if she is trapped as a bimbo forever.
Date: 08/31/16 10:31 pm Title: The First Experience
YESS!!!!!!!!! I've been WAITING for a story like this for so long, and somebody has finally made one! You're a man after my own heart, Amator. I have a feeling that if this story lives up to its potential, it will easily become one of my favorite TG fics ever.