Date: 08/24/16 10:17 pm Title: Chapter IX - The Walk in the Park
Just a really, truly wonderful story. Can barely find the words to describe it. Just perfect. Wish you the best if luck with future stories, but with experience enough to create this, there's not much to worry about
Author's Response: Aww shucks, you're too kind!
Date: 08/24/16 02:36 pm Title: Chapter I - The Show
I really liked this story - I loved the character Ryo and the ending was super sweet and really well done. Nice!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad that you liked Ryo, but personally I preferred Tahbiat. The real ending is that when Ryo returns to the park Tahbiat is still there and eats Ryo. Regrettable, but true. (This is why I don't write sequels)
Date: 08/24/16 06:10 am Title: Chapter IX - The Walk in the Park
Great story. Nicely written with well thought out humor and a very enjoyable ending.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the ending. I highly value a good ending in the things I read, so I do try my best do make good ones. I'm glad this one turned out, because this was a story that I originally abandoned for over a year before coming back and writing the second half.