Reviews For A Walk in the Park
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Reviewer: storylovinggamer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/24/17 03:58 am Title: Chapter IX - The Walk in the Park

Very cool story!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad to hear some people are still finding it even some time after it has been posted ^_^

Reviewer: DC1writes Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/24/16 10:17 pm Title: Chapter IX - The Walk in the Park

Just a really, truly wonderful story. Can barely find the words to describe it. Just perfect. Wish you the best if luck with future stories, but with experience enough to create this, there's not much to worry about

Author's Response: Aww shucks, you're too kind!

Reviewer: Faye Kistry Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/24/16 07:49 pm Title: Chapter IX - The Walk in the Park

Very fine work! A humorous and well plotted sexy romp. Thankyou!

Author's Response: You're welcome!

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/24/16 02:36 pm Title: Chapter I - The Show

I really liked this story - I loved the character Ryo and the ending was super sweet and really well done. Nice!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad that you liked Ryo, but personally I preferred Tahbiat. The real ending is that when Ryo returns to the park Tahbiat is still there and eats Ryo. Regrettable, but true. (This is why I don't write sequels)

Reviewer: Casey Thompson Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/24/16 07:53 am Title: Chapter IX - The Walk in the Park

I enjoyed this story immensely.

Author's Response: Glad to hear it!

Reviewer: HumanInDisguise Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/24/16 06:10 am Title: Chapter IX - The Walk in the Park

Great story. Nicely written with well thought out humor and a very enjoyable ending.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the ending. I highly value a good ending in the things I read, so I do try my best do make good ones. I'm glad this one turned out, because this was a story that I originally abandoned for over a year before coming back and writing the second half.

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