Date: 04/24/17 02:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Read all three chapters. Enjoyed the ending, and will not spoil it to much by saying how I enjoyed the role reversals in two of the stories. I'd also think that there would be better training for the retrieval teams. Hopefully more people visit the site soon.
Date: 08/22/16 12:29 am Title: Chapter 1
What in the world is this monster doing to Ashley? She's an abused wife just trying to find herself and her strength and this so called moderator who probably thinks he's being benevolent is transforming her against her will? What a horrible monster...
And oh Goddess what is going to happen to those kids?! Terrifying...
Date: 08/21/16 01:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Off to a great start! Each of the characters gets some time in the spot light to establish who they are and get myself invested in them, as well as drop some minor hints as to what sort of transformation they're about to undergo. It was an engrossing read from start to finish I'm eager to see how this turns out.
One minor critique I have is the overuse of adverbs in some of the dialogue tags. However, these don't detract from the story too much.