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Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/12/18 11:09 am Title: Chapter 4

Wow what in the world, that escalated quickly. Just how much pull does he have? Is this really a realistic change? I keep expecting some kind of weird sci fi or magick storyline to make sense of how Zack is acting. This is pretty different.

Reviewer: ARUSHI Signed Report
Date: 11/12/16 11:01 am Title: Chapter 1

It is such an exciting story I am dying to read the next chapter plzz release it asap

Reviewer: Buffyfan1790 Signed Report
Date: 08/24/16 10:57 am Title: Chapter 1

Any word on a new chapter?!

Reviewer: Buffyfan1790 Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/17/16 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

Loving the premise of this that his (presumably same aged?) mate is going to become his de facto stepfather! Would be wonderful if they could find a way to "legally" get "her" into nursery or junior school for to start again as a little girl!

Reviewer: pantywaist-ken Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 08/17/16 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 2

Good beginning!

Reviewer: 930310 Signed Report
Date: 08/17/16 11:25 am Title: Chapter 1

His friend is certainly not his friend any longer. I think there was way too little motivation for the personality change of Zack.

Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/16/16 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 2

This is like a dark comedy, his best friend becomes his dad, and he's going to become his mother and zack's little girl? That is so weird but interesting xD

Author's Response: I'm glad I could peak your interest!

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