Date: 08/19/16 07:10 pm Title: High-Flyer
Another wonderful story by a someone who is quickly becoming one of my favorite authors on this site.
The thing I liked most about this was the agency you gave to the main character. You weren't FORCING Ron into accepting her new life as Shelley, she CHOSE to because it made her happier and more fulfilled. This is a surprisingly progressive TG story. Kudos.
Date: 08/11/16 02:43 pm Title: High-Flyer
Highly enjoyable but there are some flawless in the story
A little bit details of the body modification will be great.
Maybe you can add more details before ending the story.
Keep going and the story is lovely and highly recommended.
Date: 08/07/16 08:54 am Title: High-Flyer
I love gradual changes, and this satisfied that pleasure well without drawing it out overlong. And while I feel the punishment was rather more than he deserved, I like how you handled it at the end. He wasn't locked into this new life, but could change it if he wanted to. Well done.
Date: 08/06/16 08:30 pm Title: High-Flyer
Nice little fantasy, an enjoyable read, thank you.
Date: 08/06/16 06:25 pm Title: High-Flyer
This is precisely such a story I like to read! I've written some of a related kind myself. Only a single one complaint: I wanted this story to be far longer! With Shelley finding love with the pilot woman and may be wed her, rising in ranks to become purser, with bagging a job in training stewardesses... Until, may be, one day she might meet a very obnoxious female passenger with a groping hand of her own, and can pass the curse on to create a new man... May be I've planted an idea on how to extend this story now - hope so at least!
Author's Response: Hi AB, nice to get feedback from you-- I'm a fan of your stories too. "Your story is too short" is a common complaint I get, which I choose to take as a compliment. I prefer to keep them short and sweet and then move on to the next idea. Glad you liked it though!