Reviews For Simon Says
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Reviewer: Xoop Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/18/16 06:19 am Title: Simon Says: Sssseduction...

Nice every now and then to see an unwanted TG that still turns out well. Good job.

Reviewer: WomanOfSteel59 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/17/16 06:45 pm Title: Simon Says: Sssseduction...

Fantastic! Such a great concept and execution!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/16/16 10:56 am Title: Simon Says: Sssseduction...

No but maybe another chapter with them switching back and forth,could get interesting!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/15/16 07:59 pm Title: Simon Says: Sssseduction...

Good story,the ending would have been the out come I would have suggested!

Author's Response: Thanks. I hope the ending wasn't too obvious, too soon!

Reviewer: Portia Bennett Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/15/16 04:22 pm Title: Simon Says: Sssseduction...

They came up with the only solution I could see,

Author's Response: It's funny, but until about two seconds before I wrote the line about getting another batch of potion for Simon, I didn't know how this thing was gonna work itself out! So true about what writers often say about their work: they had to write the story to find out how it ends.

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Date: 07/15/16 11:10 am Title: Simon Says: Sssseduction...

An interesting concept. I liked how vague Fitz was every time he called Simon. Good story!

Author's Response: Thanks. I was indeed trying to capture the kind of confusion such an event would cause. No matter how bizarre the premise or the situation, it's important that the characters react like real people.

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