Date: 07/28/16 04:36 pm Title: Butterfly Effect
It really end up too soon. It's a great story but i would love to see the reaction of his family and Karen when he announce he want to stay in that way. And i would love to see him taking hormones and have boobs job. Your too fast to ending up this story :(
Date: 07/27/16 07:21 pm Title: Butterfly Effect
I really liked the story and I thank you for creating it. I have to say, however, that the ending was a bit of a let down. It almost seems as though you grew tired of this story and wrapped it up with a rather summary ending.
I think there could have been much more that Danny/Cassidy and Max could have experienced on their Ireland trip - more romance and more sex. But that's just my two cents.
Thanks again for writing it, but I'd like to encourage you to add to it.
Author's Response: You're sort of right. Initially, the story ended before they went home together. I had planned on it being an "all ages" tale. But then I felt like it wasn't complete and added the last chapter. So... well, I don't know. I felt sort of light and innocent when I wrote it and didn't want to take it further. I ended up pouring all that energy into others, like Collienti 37s.
Date: 07/18/16 06:53 pm Title: No, Not That Kind of Final
Fantastic! Bachelor Bacherlorette, The Bedroom Wig and this one are my favourites! Have you published elsewhere?
Author's Response: I'm new to this and don't know of other sites to share. You'll like my favorite, Collienti 37s - it's just getting exciting! Thank you for the nice note,
Date: 07/14/16 07:12 pm Title: Butterfly Effect
Il love this story. Soud promising with full of surprise. X.X.X...
Author's Response: It's a sweet story but I don't want you to be let down - it's predictable. In this one, I tried to create more of a comedy of errors transition. Collienti 37s (which I'm posting concurrently) is way more fun.