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Reviewer: Renee Signed Report
Date: 07/08/18 12:26 pm Title: Author's Postscript

I loved this story, bring out more drew nance girl detective.

Reviewer: RobynAitch Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 12/27/16 10:15 pm Title: Author's Postscript

I really enjoyed this first book and am looking forward to the next installment. You've captured that Nancy Drew / Veronica Mars feeling really well, with the added crossdressing giving it a nice hook. Drew does come off as a bit of a Mary Sue, with her secret coming across as her only real challenge. It still works well for a first foray, but it'd be nice to see her overcoming more in the next one. Other than that, a lovely read, and I liked the nod to Danny you included.

Reviewer: Tahiri Veila Signed Report
Date: 07/19/16 06:32 pm Title: One: Bill and Carson / Drew and Andy

thank you anyway you mentioned that you don't think your English is that good if that's so i don't think its reflected in your story's.

Author's Response: Thank you, Tahiri. You are too kind. I think you know that I post my stories in other sites as well, and in those sites, I get hit by public corrections on my grammar (I don't blame them - I often commit grammar errors), but, as you may know, amateur writers (like me) are greatly affected by comments on their stuff. So, in other sites, I make it a point to comment that if one has a grammar correction to point out, to please send the writer a private message instead of posting an embarrassing public comment. After all we are only amateur writers. Sure, comments on story or content or composition is fair game, but comments on grammar or spelling should be kept private.

Reviewer: Tahiri Veila Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/18/16 05:41 pm Title: One: Bill and Carson / Drew and Andy

good book whens book 2 coming out

Author's Response: Thank you @Tahiti Veila I'm sorry, I don't work to a schedule :( I hope I finish it soon, though.

Reviewer: Christina H Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/04/16 12:52 pm Title: One: Bill and Carson / Drew and Andy

Agree with the others this was a great story it had everything a story needs it was funny, exciting, enthralling and extremely well written.

I am so happy to read that there will be a sequel to this and hope all the characters are in it as the interaction was brilliant

Author's Response: I appreciate it a lot, Christina. Thanks! Yes, there will be a new Drew story soon (not necessarily a "sequel" since I intend the Drew stories to be readable independently).

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/30/16 04:38 am Title: Author's Postscript

I LOVED this story! It was really fun and if I could have read it all in one sitting I would have. It was great reading and I love Drew.

Author's Response: Thanks again for being a fan Kathryn :)

Reviewer: FlareDragon Signed Report
Date: 06/29/16 10:13 am Title: One: Bill and Carson / Drew and Andy

It's a great story, an Im currious if there will be more?

Author's Response: Hi, FlareDragon! Yes, indeed, there will be more! I am currently working on Book 2, and it's entitled "The Hidden Staircase." As to when I can finish it, I am not sure. I am currently working on other stuff, such as the conclusion of one of my other stories, "Danny." In the meantime, please feel free to check out my other stuff. Thanks for reading, and I appreciate the kind words. - Bobbie

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