Date: 03/11/15 10:12 pm Title: The Epilogue
I did a bit of rereading on this after browsing your stories just to find the one I was most looking forward to you deleted. I wanted to know more about that World War 3 story! It had a promising start!
Author's Response: It is over a month since this review was posted, and I was not notified of it. Anyway, yes, "Battlefront" was deleted. I could go no further on it, writing was a literal crawl with one letter typed every week. It was sad, I liked it too.
Date: 11/20/14 02:04 am Title: The Heels
Wait. What the heck is going on now??? When is this brainwashing happening, and dang, FOUR INCHES, her booty better be amazing to wear four inches for that. Three inches is hard enough, jeeze!
Author's Response: Some women can handle six inches.
Date: 11/20/14 01:59 am Title: The Earrings
Damn. Hoops are heavy. Gold ones are especially heavy. Strong ears on that one. And why is (s)he matching panties to polish??? Too much work...
Author's Response: Some people just like to do that. Girl I dated in high school matched EVERYTHING. Not even joking.
Date: 11/20/14 01:57 am Title: The Perfume
You have some tense issues here. The last line disagrees with the rest of the story. Also, I've been perfume shopping in Victoria's Secret. Most of them smell like alcohol with synthetic aromatics. The ones that actually smell like something are the expensive ones. Also, am I the only one wondering who/what is causing this change?
Author's Response: Clearly (s)he has some money to spend.
Date: 11/20/14 01:48 am Title: The Panties
Well at least he's finally noticing stuff. Nice word usage, but nobody actually uses gals anymore (except my grandma for some odd reason, and she usually uses the term girl friends).
Author's Response: I've heard plenty of women use the term "gals". My ex-girlfriend used it.
Date: 10/05/14 07:12 pm Title: The Epilogue
I forgot where I left off on the roleplayer series and I felt too lazy to find out. So I read this.
And seriously? How am I the second review?
I'll even add a star rating because I'm the second review. I feel so special. You sure were under appreciated way back in... January 2012? Sheesh, no wonder I'm the second review. Still, it's a bit short, but overall a good story. Your writing has barely changed. It's just gotten longer.
Author's Response: The last one you reviewed was the first story in the "Roleplaying" series, so I assume you haven't yet read the second. This one was never meant to be long. Wasn't until later that I decided to write longer stories, and it's paid off.
Date: 05/26/14 03:13 am Title: The Epilogue
Wonderful story, story flowed like silk or smoother
Author's Response: Hey, a review! This story's had a five-star rating for some time, but this is FINALLY the first review! Thank you for reading, and enjoying, and especially REVIEWING!