Reviews For Twisting My Life
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Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/06/20 04:09 pm Title: The Epilogue

Nice job.

Reviewer: Person42 Signed Report
Date: 03/11/15 10:12 pm Title: The Epilogue

I did a bit of rereading on this after browsing your stories just to find the one I was most looking forward to you deleted. I wanted to know more about that World War 3 story! It had a promising start!

Author's Response: It is over a month since this review was posted, and I was not notified of it. Anyway, yes, "Battlefront" was deleted. I could go no further on it, writing was a literal crawl with one letter typed every week. It was sad, I liked it too.

Reviewer: StephAD Signed Report
Date: 11/20/14 02:11 am Title: The Epilogue

Huh. How about that. The brainwashed slave married her brainwasher...surprising....

Author's Response: A match made... Some... Where...

Reviewer: StephAD Signed Report
Date: 11/20/14 02:10 am Title: The Surgery and the Truth

AHHH MAGICAL MOVIES AHA!

Author's Response: Not magic, subliminal messages.

Reviewer: StephAD Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/20/14 02:09 am Title: The Dress and the Ring

Wait wut...I'm confused now. Creepyness abounds here....

Author's Response: What's confusing?

Reviewer: StephAD Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/20/14 02:08 am Title: The Skirt

I SHALL KEEP GOING SIR AZORATH! Wait. Wrong story....

Dat booty tho...messin' up the papers...f'shame....

Author's Response: Yep. Got a good booty.

Reviewer: StephAD Signed Report
Date: 11/20/14 02:06 am Title: The Blouse

Hmmm...this resocialization is taking interesting turns.... I'll have to ask my sociology professor about it....

Author's Response: Some people just make connections, prior to or after big changes.

Reviewer: StephAD Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/20/14 02:04 am Title: The Heels

Wait. What the heck is going on now??? When is this brainwashing happening, and dang, FOUR INCHES, her booty better be amazing to wear four inches for that. Three inches is hard enough, jeeze!

Author's Response: Some women can handle six inches.

Reviewer: StephAD Signed Report
Date: 11/20/14 02:01 am Title: The Nylons and the Garter Belt

As a matter of fact, wearing tight weave nylons does not require leg shaving. I can attest. As for no socks...I hope his/her feet don't sweat....

Author's Response: Good to know.

Reviewer: StephAD Signed Report
Date: 11/20/14 01:59 am Title: The Earrings

Damn. Hoops are heavy. Gold ones are especially heavy. Strong ears on that one. And why is (s)he matching panties to polish??? Too much work...

Author's Response: Some people just like to do that. Girl I dated in high school matched EVERYTHING. Not even joking.

Reviewer: StephAD Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/20/14 01:57 am Title: The Perfume

You have some tense issues here. The last line disagrees with the rest of the story. Also, I've been perfume shopping in Victoria's Secret. Most of them smell like alcohol with synthetic aromatics. The ones that actually smell like something are the expensive ones. Also, am I the only one wondering who/what is causing this change?

Author's Response: Clearly (s)he has some money to spend.

Reviewer: StephAD Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/20/14 01:53 am Title: The Nail Polish

A clear coat on top of your color helps to avoid needing touch-ups. Just fyi, protagonist-whose-name-I-don't-know.

Author's Response: (S)He probably knows that.

Reviewer: StephAD Signed Report
Date: 11/20/14 01:51 am Title: The Lipstick

Dude. Our protagonist has some serious short-term memory loss issues. Can't even remember putting on lipstick...what's the world coming to....

Author's Response: He's just more than a little confused at the moment.

Reviewer: StephAD Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/20/14 01:50 am Title: The Bra

Woah eighty pairs! Laundry day must be crazy! And he's referring to himself as a woman now...interesting....

Author's Response: Well, Laundry day is probably more often that it should be with 80 pairs of underwear.

Reviewer: StephAD Signed Report
Date: 11/20/14 01:48 am Title: The Panties

Well at least he's finally noticing stuff. Nice word usage, but nobody actually uses gals anymore (except my grandma for some odd reason, and she usually uses the term girl friends).

Author's Response: I've heard plenty of women use the term "gals". My ex-girlfriend used it.

Reviewer: StephAD Signed Report
Date: 11/20/14 01:45 am Title: The Purse

Wait...Is he a womanizer? He's forgetting the girls he screwed...hmmm...could this be a righteous vengeance story?

Author's Response: He's a big womanizer.

Reviewer: Person42 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/05/14 07:12 pm Title: The Epilogue

I forgot where I left off on the roleplayer series and I felt too lazy to find out. So I read this.

And seriously? How am I the second review?

I'll even add a star rating because I'm the second review. I feel so special. You sure were under appreciated way back in... January 2012? Sheesh, no wonder I'm the second review. Still, it's a bit short, but overall a good story. Your writing has barely changed. It's just gotten longer.

Author's Response: The last one you reviewed was the first story in the "Roleplaying" series, so I assume you haven't yet read the second. This one was never meant to be long. Wasn't until later that I decided to write longer stories, and it's paid off.

Reviewer: Kazumy Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/26/14 03:13 am Title: The Epilogue

Wonderful story, story flowed like silk or smoother

Author's Response: Hey, a review! This story's had a five-star rating for some time, but this is FINALLY the first review! Thank you for reading, and enjoying, and especially REVIEWING!

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