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Reviewer: sourmashwhiskey Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/26/16 02:24 am Title: The Final Look

Awesome! I love happy endings!

Reviewer: Natasa Jacobs Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/05/16 03:16 pm Title: The Final Look

very good story. I love revenge and I wish this was real. I know a few men out there that could use this kind of revenge. Plus I would have used this to be a full woman myself.

Author's Response: You'd probably like The Boss's Coffee and Window of Opportunity as well. Thanks for the nice words!

Reviewer: Artemesia Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/02/16 03:48 pm Title: Money and Power

Really enjoyed this. I liked the mental changes and the slow transformation. But of course I loved the boob expansion! Great work. - A

Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed Report
Date: 06/01/16 01:42 pm Title: Money and Power

You know, it's often an interesting decision - where to end. Yes, The Final Look is the last chapter. Once the main character had fully developed and revenge was satisfied, it felt like the rest was easy enough to imagine. Where would you take it from here?

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed Report
Date: 06/01/16 03:48 am Title: Money and Power

Chloe - the story is interesting, but it feels unfinished - like there was one more chapter to write to finish it off. It feels like you had more to say - but just stopped. Is the story finished, or is there more to come?

Author's Response: You know, it's often an interesting decision - where to end. Yes, The Final Look is the last chapter. Once the main character had fully developed and revenge was satisfied, it felt like the rest was easy enough to imagine. Where would you take it from here?

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