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Reviewer: NatalieRath Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/03/16 01:23 pm Title: PROLOGUE: Apocalypse Begins

Hmm... Really nice :)

Author's Response: Thank you! :3

Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/28/16 08:14 pm Title: PROLOGUE: Apocalypse Begins

OH SNAP! They were just doing their job, found them out and they got kidnapped and experimented on. Super evil corporation that also employs nekos? This revamp sounds amazing, a few spelling errors here and there but honestly that doesn't matter. I'm just glad you're up and writing again. I cant wait to see where you take this :D

Author's Response: Ha ha ha!! Did you see what's wrong with that setting? A police officer's disappearance is a serious matter and the first place they searched would be where the two had last investigated. Since Hawk and Keith confirmed that their hunch was correct, we can all agree that they'd came to know everything. Can you guess how INCL blotted out the case? Here are some hints:

ONE, the morgue was always in close collaboration with the force, any suspicious movement would be exposed right immediately.

And TWO, INCL failed to progress their Neko experiment but in exchange, they received an abnormal boost of human experimentation.

Lastly, INCL targeted alpha preys and those big preys'd had to show a few of their superior traits in public for them to get noticed. It would be really stupid to try and capture them when they could take their time to train one...hard works beat geniuses after all.

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