Reviews For Seven Days
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Reviewer: 930310 Signed Report
Date: 06/13/16 03:44 pm Title: Mid Day One

That Dan is a real asshole to his friend.

Reviewer: 930310 Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 06/13/16 03:38 pm Title: Day 0 & Day 1

Using a ',' every now and then really helps making the text comprehensible.

Reviewer: Lockshockbear Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/19/16 01:18 am Title: Day 0 & Day 1

Could use a bit more detail on the descriptions of "her" body, clothes, etc but looking forward to more of this!

Reviewer: Carly I Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/18/16 06:17 am Title: Day 0 & Day 1

Keep it up Bob!! Both stories are excellent!!!;)

Reviewer: catfish Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/16/16 10:52 pm Title: Day 0 & Day 1

I enjoy a good reality-alteration story, so I'm definitely looking forward to more. My one criticism is that this could have used a little more editing for phrasing and punctuation.

Did you mean to put this in the "sci-fi" category instead of the "magic" category?

Reviewer: jkenny Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/16/16 06:53 pm Title: Day 0 & Day 1

good stuff. Keep it up!

Reviewer: ajoichu Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/16/16 03:09 pm Title: Day 0 & Day 1

looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/16/16 02:42 pm Title: Day 0 & Day 1

Look forward to the future chapters.

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