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Reviewer: FifthJirk Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/12/16 07:59 am Title: Episode Two. Doubt

Very good chapter or an episode Idont know how to call it =D I read it from the begining again - i have a few questions - first how did Rachel knew Arrow? I know why he is there but I think it needs a litle explanation. And Second why make Rachel a CSI? Sometimes I think it would have been better to change Barry. I am sure all of this is only because these are the first episodes I remember truly loving the show from the Christmas Reverse Flash episode.

I am interested in the love interests - I can see Will is one but since this storys sexual orientation is written bisexual - I am curious who will be a female love interest.

One last question =) will you be doing the crossover with Arrow?

Looking forward for the nex episode.

Author's Response: I don't think i wrote it quite clear enough. Basically instead of Barry meeting the arrow during the super soldier thing in the arrow episode, Rachel/Nathan accidentally stumbled into it and helped. I tried mentioning it in the middle of their conversation, but It didn't quite come out the way I had planned. The reason I made Rachel a CSI is because there is a reason why Barry is still in this story. What do you think Barry is feeling right now after seeing a speedster at the Simon Stagg reward party. This episode coming up is going to be a little different. I'm going to introduce another character and yes the Arrow crossover will be there, Felicity is actually in this next episode :P. Love interest is going to be a surprise.

Reviewer: FifthJirk Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/03/16 07:40 am Title: The new introduction.

This is fun. I am a huge fan of CWs Flash and liked this very much. For future chapters you should change at least a few characters meaning the villains and some dialog from the episodes.

At first I thought that Rachel would have Violet Lightning oh well - Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Who says she won't? :P. I most definitely will be changing characters around. This is going to get really mind boggling in later chapters since we don't know who the Reverse Flash is now, what role Barry Allen himself is going to play.

Reviewer: pinkbrenna14 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/03/16 04:23 am Title: The new introduction.

What an amazing start! I am excited to read this as it comes out!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I hope to keep them coming.

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