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Reviewer: Arisu Elementine Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/07/16 12:53 pm Title: The Getaway

Well ok then... lol, didn't take those 'girl's too long to let go of their inhibitions XD though personally I would have listed this story as Realistic Crossdressing and TV since they don't appear to be actually changing sex, just dressing the part. Still it was a good read, I'm quite enjoying your works so far.

Author's Response: You're so right! I changed it. I hadn't really appreciated the difference. Now, it makes me wonder how to best classify some of the others.

Reviewer: tiffi Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/30/16 11:39 am Title: The Fans

Delicious! You are so talented and imaginative. I can help with the odd spelling miscue.
Other than that, lovely story! Write me for my email please

Reviewer: EBacon94 Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/29/16 02:46 pm Title: The Getaway

Its a good story but the third chapter progressed a bit too quickly for my taste, more character development as their preferences changed would have been better. Also there is a few times with typos or missing letters in your words but that's just what happens. All in all a great story :)

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