Reviews For Misunderstood
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Reviewer: Johanna Bender Signed starstar Report
Date: 07/08/16 11:22 am Title: Chapter 1 Fred ask's for help with his identity problem

The character of Fred is a bit too silly for my taste. I am a supporter of artistic license, but the whole sequence of events seemed ridiculous.

Reviewer: ElizahAT Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/10/16 02:43 am Title: Chapter 4 a unexpected visit from the real Larri's fiancée

Very interesting. You gave alot of good luck for the new Larri yet I am still enjoying this story.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed Report
Date: 04/24/16 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 1 Fred ask's for help with his identity problem

As one person who edits without word wrap to another, you might want to edit your chapter so there aren't all those unnecessary line breaks. :)

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