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Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed Report
Date: 04/22/16 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good beginning!

Reviewer: FaithRomeyer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/21/16 07:19 am Title: Chapter 1

Look very promising so far. Good pace, nice beginning and a steady style. Guess we'll have to wait and find out if we could add something more. For now, I just wish that this chapter could have gone on a little longer, like maybe 1000 words or something.

Reviewer: ubougie Signed Report
Date: 04/20/16 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nice start, looking forward to more.

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