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Reviewer: Hikaro Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/18/16 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well, now, that was an interesting read. The twist surprised the hell out of me, and I've read (and written) so many twists that I can usually predict them.

Despite the tag, the incest was also a surprising twist. Puts a new spin on the old adage "women go on to marry their fathers".

I'm only a little bit confused at why every mother in that town was a bitch to their sons. They very much deserve what happened to them, though.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I guess I've developed a reputation for twists, but that's the fun part for me. The reason why every mother was a bad one was because I needed justification!

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