Date: 05/30/16 10:51 am Title: EPILOUGE
I really, really liked how this story ended, Layne. It was realistic and heartfelt and it really felt real. I applaud you! This was a really great story to read. I think the lettermail concept worked really well for you in this story. It was a blast from beginning to end, and I really think you dodged a bullet by NOT having Penny and Alexis get together - I think it was the best choice.
Author's Response: Thanks! It was hard to break Alexis' heart like that, but I think she's better off for it too.
Date: 05/17/16 07:25 pm Title: CHAPTER FIVE
I love the email method. It works really well for getting details out of the way without having to working them into a conversation. And the plot's interesting and more than I expected. I'm not sure I get why Alexis didn't remember much about having sex, though. If you didn't want to write about that, maybe she should have just been too polite to share.
I look forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks for your thoughts! The reason Alexis didn't mention much of the sex is because she was drunk and a little ashamed. As for the measurements? I was basing them off of Brooklyn Decker, but made her a little shorter.