Reviews For Femail
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Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/02/16 02:27 pm Title: EPILOUGE

A fun method and a good story. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: DarkLuke Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/02/16 04:06 am Title: EPILOUGE

Please do a prequel on Sarah! This story is killer!

Author's Response: That's not a bad idea. If I'm not buy with commissions I'll give it a go.

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/30/16 10:51 am Title: EPILOUGE

I really, really liked how this story ended, Layne. It was realistic and heartfelt and it really felt real. I applaud you! This was a really great story to read. I think the lettermail concept worked really well for you in this story. It was a blast from beginning to end, and I really think you dodged a bullet by NOT having Penny and Alexis get together - I think it was the best choice.

Author's Response: Thanks! It was hard to break Alexis' heart like that, but I think she's better off for it too.

Reviewer: Cashmere Chloe Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/17/16 07:25 pm Title: CHAPTER FIVE

I love the email method. It works really well for getting details out of the way without having to working them into a conversation. And the plot's interesting and more than I expected. I'm not sure I get why Alexis didn't remember much about having sex, though. If you didn't want to write about that, maybe she should have just been too polite to share.
I look forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks for your thoughts! The reason Alexis didn't mention much of the sex is because she was drunk and a little ashamed. As for the measurements? I was basing them off of Brooklyn Decker, but made her a little shorter.

Reviewer: Elygianne Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 05/08/16 10:50 am Title: CHAPTER ONE

Like it, an enjoyable read.

Reviewer: aquerty Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/08/16 12:35 am Title: CHAPTER FOUR

Have to say I like this story a lot so far. Keep it up.

Reviewer: Day Dreamer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/18/16 12:35 am Title: CHAPTER ONE

Ohhh... This is gonna be good. This already IS good. Well written, and a nice opening.

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