Well written, and felt like the story ended properly.
can't download thisAuthor's Response: I'm sorry, but I have no idea why the story won't download as I tried it myself and got the 404 page. I would contact the admin and ask them.
Very good, I enjoyed it
Sooo cute, I got wet just reading this story, you are sooo good.Author's Response: Thanks, I'm taking that as high praise!
Well done,nice plot.
Short, nicely written. I don't feel sorry for fools.Author's Response: Thanks, me either.
Liked it. Wish you'd lengthened it with more detail, but nice.Author's Response: Thanks, and what details would you like to see more of?
Nicely written! I like it!Author's Response: Thanks!