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Reviewer: ninaanderson Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/24/20 03:11 am Title: "Fools Rush into the Gym"

Well written, and felt like the story ended properly.

Reviewer: Tahiri Veila Signed Report
Date: 04/14/16 03:10 pm Title: "Fools Rush into the Gym"

can't download this

Author's Response: I'm sorry, but I have no idea why the story won't download as I tried it myself and got the 404 page. I would contact the admin and ask them.

Reviewer: Tahiri Veila Signed Report
Date: 04/13/16 02:08 pm Title: "Fools Rush into the Gym"

can't download

Reviewer: Erectowl Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/12/16 12:32 am Title: "Fools Rush into the Gym"

Very good, I enjoyed it

Reviewer: Maryjane Signed Report
Date: 04/11/16 07:25 pm Title: "Fools Rush into the Gym"

Sooo cute, I got wet just reading this story, you are sooo good.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm taking that as high praise!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/11/16 10:31 am Title: "Fools Rush into the Gym"

Well done,nice plot.

Reviewer: Karl Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/11/16 09:29 am Title: "Fools Rush into the Gym"

Short, nicely written. I don't feel sorry for fools.

Author's Response: Thanks, me either.

Reviewer: Casey Thompson Signed Report
Date: 04/11/16 04:25 am Title: "Fools Rush into the Gym"

Liked it. Wish you'd lengthened it with more detail, but nice.

Author's Response: Thanks, and what details would you like to see more of?

Reviewer: Zsuzsi Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/10/16 11:29 pm Title: "Fools Rush into the Gym"

Nicely written! I like it!

Author's Response: Thanks!

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