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Reviewer: Alex69 Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/15/16 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was a great quickie!

Reviewer: Zsuzsi Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/10/16 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh hey! You're here, too! Great work!

Reviewer: scottkuma Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/10/16 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very fun! Can't wait to see what other adventures Donald has!

Reviewer: Dwere Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 04/09/16 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

Paragraphs are your friend. Tough read.

Author's Response: Updated! So sorry for that, I didn't preview before I posted and none of the other places I post to require a

to break it up. I hope you'll give it another shot and another review!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/09/16 09:55 am Title: Chapter 1

Nice,a interesting read.

Author's Response: Thank you! And really, really sorry about the formatting!

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