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Reviewer: Griffin Signed Report
Date: 02/01/19 11:09 pm Title: The Introduction. Thoughts In The Rush

I liked it and
I hope you do more.
What language do you prefer?

Reviewer: 930310 Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 02/25/17 05:49 am Title: Chapter I. Changes In The Night

A bit of explanation would not hurt. Also, she seems to be far too accepting of something like this happening to her.

Author's Response: What exactly would you like me to improve? Add more description to the transformation itself? As for the acceptance, she is transgender. I don't see any reasons why she wouldn't love it. Or do you mean that her reaction turned out rather synthetic?

Reviewer: 930310 Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/25/17 05:44 am Title: The Introduction. Thoughts In The Rush

Great writing. Interesting to see where this leads.

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