Date: 02/25/17 05:49 am Title: Chapter I. Changes In The Night
A bit of explanation would not hurt. Also, she seems to be far too accepting of something like this happening to her.
Author's Response: What exactly would you like me to improve? Add more description to the transformation itself? As for the acceptance, she is transgender. I don't see any reasons why she wouldn't love it. Or do you mean that her reaction turned out rather synthetic?