Date: 02/19/19 05:09 am Title: The Romance of Prom
Well, Chloe, I just finished your first story. Like all the others it was captivating, fun, and even had some suspense and conflict in it. I think it could have been a little longer to give more detail to the other characters. I wonder if Justin and faux Ruby will show up in your other stories?
I did have to swallow hard (pun intended) at the notion that a single blow job could 'flip the switches' on someone's orientation.
But overall I thought this was a great start to your writing career. Thanks for sharing this story with us. I'm going to keep working my way up the list.