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Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/19/19 05:09 am Title: The Romance of Prom

Well, Chloe, I just finished your first story. Like all the others it was captivating, fun, and even had some suspense and conflict in it. I think it could have been a little longer to give more detail to the other characters. I wonder if Justin and faux Ruby will show up in your other stories?
I did have to swallow hard (pun intended) at the notion that a single blow job could 'flip the switches' on someone's orientation.
But overall I thought this was a great start to your writing career. Thanks for sharing this story with us. I'm going to keep working my way up the list.

Reviewer: vanessaindressas Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/04/16 11:52 am Title: The Romance of Prom

yes a part two would be so nice..great story

Reviewer: MLMde Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/02/16 04:35 pm Title: The Romance of Prom

Very good story! I really would've liked to read what happened on Jason's yacht though.

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