Reviews For Fighting It
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Reviewer: the Morrigan Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/16/18 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 5: Winning Freedom?

Ending seems rushed. Otherwise, I love it!

Reviewer: Natasa Jacobs Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/08/16 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 5: Winning Freedom?

this was fun to read. thank for the story

Reviewer: DaniellaD Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/04/16 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 3 Mayday

Great story! Keep up the great writing. I love how despite hos efforts it is inevitable that he will change into a woman against his will.

Reviewer: Artemesia Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/31/16 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 3 Mayday

Interesting start. Looking forward to where you are going with it - A

Reviewer: Maryjane Signed Report
Date: 03/30/16 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 3 Mayday

He had it coming, with friends like him who needs enemies.

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/30/16 04:08 am Title: Chapter 1: The Start

I'll make this quick as I can.
-Pacing is too fast.
-Needs more emotion. It's kinda lame... Add some tears, feelings, HATRED!!
-Illogical. Psychotic ex + fem-syringe makes for a really strange story

Otherwise, it's pretty good though it doesn't feel right for some reason.

Reviewer: DC1writes Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/29/16 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Start

So far nice story!

Reviewer: ubougie Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/28/16 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 2

I can't make up my mind as to how to review this story, despite there being a lot I want to say. So... I think I won't. I'll just leave the first two chapters uncritiqued and make up my mind about you in later chapters and later stories. But as a gesture towards having enjoyed the story nonetheless, and you being a new author, I'll give you 5 stars. Welcome to the world of authorship.

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