Date: 06/19/18 07:00 am Title: Chapter 1 - The Pendant
Loved all the plot turns. Even I got lost at who was who a few times. Though I was waiting for the baby hat and pacifier to become a thing, lol. Though I am concerned for the real Arty and how he is able to handle the end results.
Date: 04/26/16 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Pendant
Quite a ride, well written though, I did notice the odd spelling and grammatical error here and there but nothing major. It got a little dark for a while there, but over all I'm pretty satisfied with the ending ^^
Date: 04/20/16 10:02 am Title: Chapter 4 - The Tables Turned
Love the story but I kind of wish junior ended up stuck in his sister body she end up in the little brother and he ended in junior body but it was still a great story well done
Author's Response: Thank you. I was planning something very similar to that for the final chapter, but I didn't want to upset anyone. Thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it.