Reviews For Tape in the Deck
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Reviewer: Robyn Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/14/16 05:37 pm Title: Side B

Nicely told story. I just wish there was more. I'm not a fan of the real short stories. They always leave me wondering what happened afterward.

Author's Response: WAS MY NOTICE THAT THIS WAS A MIXED TAPE STORY IGNORED?! Thank you for the compliments, but, seriously, it was a Mixed Tape story, those are short. As for what happened afterward... You could always write it yourself, y'know.

Reviewer: Quintilianus Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/14/16 04:26 am Title: Side A

That was pretty good--short and simple (almost literally the bare minimum length required to be a full story), but inventive and entertaining. I could see this printed out on a sheet of paper, with one chapter on each side. It's a very clever use of formatting. I would have definitely liked it if the title matched the story more, but I got the joke.

Although, I do wonder if the effects will wear off on their own or not. Either way, I imagine that the characters are going to be stumbling around for a while until they've figured out exactly what happened to them.

Author's Response: My problem with the title is that I never knew what to call it in the first place. I don't know if they'll ever know what exactly happened to them.

Reviewer: 930310 Signed Report
Date: 03/13/16 10:28 pm Title: Side A

Yeah... That was indeed quick... I don't really know what to say since this is not my cup of tea.

Author's Response: You all read the "Going to be a Mixed Tape story" line, right? I swear I said that.

Reviewer: Lanz Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/13/16 02:48 pm Title: Side A

Interesting! A fun quick read!

Author's Response: Originally a Mixed Tape story. They're always short.

Reviewer: Pablo Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/13/16 02:18 pm Title: Side A

Jesus, Josh, what was going through your mind when you concocted this one? But it was a fun and interesting read; and very quick.

Author's Response: I was playing Cards Against Humanity.

Reviewer: Selvanius Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/13/16 01:15 pm Title: Side A

Well that was quick.

Author's Response: Well, it was going to be a Mixed Tape story. I didn't extend it afterward.

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