Date: 03/14/16 05:37 pm Title: Side B
Nicely told story. I just wish there was more. I'm not a fan of the real short stories. They always leave me wondering what happened afterward.
Author's Response: WAS MY NOTICE THAT THIS WAS A MIXED TAPE STORY IGNORED?! Thank you for the compliments, but, seriously, it was a Mixed Tape story, those are short. As for what happened afterward... You could always write it yourself, y'know.
Date: 03/14/16 04:26 am Title: Side A
That was pretty good--short and simple (almost literally the bare minimum length required to be a full story), but inventive and entertaining. I could see this printed out on a sheet of paper, with one chapter on each side. It's a very clever use of formatting. I would have definitely liked it if the title matched the story more, but I got the joke.
Although, I do wonder if the effects will wear off on their own or not. Either way, I imagine that the characters are going to be stumbling around for a while until they've figured out exactly what happened to them.
Author's Response: My problem with the title is that I never knew what to call it in the first place. I don't know if they'll ever know what exactly happened to them.