Reviews For My Sister's Baby
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Reviewer: HiccupFlux Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 04/05/18 05:21 am Title: Chapter 1

Short but cute. It would be fun to have more development with characters and plot. How did Ruby age regress? Why was Jill in the play pen? I thought Jill wasn't apart of the age play, but just the mommy role? What was going through Ruby's mind? How did the mom find out?

Reviewer: Princess_Panty_boy 92646 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/10/17 12:32 am Title: Chapter 3

Cute story hun thank you for sharing your story with us. Hope to read more soon.

I hope the chapters will be longer if possible.
Hugs Princess

Reviewer: RyanTheWriter Signed Report
Date: 04/30/16 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 3

More please....Chapter 3 was great..

Reviewer: RyanTheWriter Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 04/30/16 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

BallerinaBoy, as Valentine wrote...good start, however I have to agree with GollyWally, it needs to be 3x longer. The characters are fun to read, however, when's the next chapter? 3 stars, 4 if it was longer.

Reviewer: Valentine Signed star Report
Date: 03/29/16 07:32 am Title: Chapter 1

You have an outline of what could be an interesting story, but you really need to fill in the details.

Reviewer: Emily Signed starstar Report
Date: 03/12/16 01:50 am Title: Chapter 1

Extremely short, and not very original tbh

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