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Reviewer: Artemesia Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/30/16 07:49 pm Title: Chapter Four: Swimming? Really?

Always amazing. This one takes your style to the next level. Incredible! - A

Reviewer: MrPeanutbutter Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/29/16 10:08 pm Title: Chapter Four: Swimming? Really?

This is sort of a retroactive review for the series, but this has been a really fun read so far. I enjoy the way you are playing around with horror movie tropes. As always with a TGTrinity story, the sex scenes are sexy, and I really enjoy the narrative frame that you've got going on. I can't wait to see the rest of the gory direction the story will go in (I mean, it is sex AND death, so I'm looking forward to the death as well).

Author's Response: You won't have to wait too long, as the next chapter definitely brings the "Death" promised in the title.

Reviewer: Sanro Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/17/16 04:59 pm Title: Chapter Two: "The Cards Will Tell"

Very nice story so far 😘

Reviewer: Lanz Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/13/16 02:54 pm Title: Chapter One: "Long Oak Lodge"

I like the opening, with Marc (I think) getting questioned. I'll be following this one...

Reviewer: Ezra Bjorn Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/11/16 06:06 pm Title: Chapter One: "Long Oak Lodge"

Exciting beginning! I can't wait to read more. The cabin story has been done before, the half change, half don't too, but your strength of narrative and well-drawn characters make it interesting. Let's have some more soon.

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