Date: 03/11/16 08:15 am Title: Chapter 1: The first day in a new world
Minus the grammatical and spelling errors, this story is perfect. It nails so many points for me. Fantasy, RPG, becoming a young adolescent, wolf paraphernalia, frost magic.
Please continue this story, I can see it expanding into something really incredible.
Also, let me know if you're looking for an editor, I'd be happy to oblige :)
Date: 03/07/16 03:43 am Title: Chapter 1: The first day in a new world
I love the premise. I have thought about these events playing out in my head more times than I can count. Hope you keep this one going, absolutely wan't more.
Author's Response: I plan on keeping the story going, but it will have to wait till school slows down.
Date: 03/05/16 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 1: The first day in a new world
This story is like a rough diamond. Some good polishing (Grammar, punctuation, and writing fixes.) will make this story great. For now, make a better explanation of how they were transported. I'll be here to help if ya need it and if you're truly devoted to this story, I can help proofread it with my spare time.