Date: 03/10/16 03:28 pm Title: Finally
Hi Wickedkitty - I'm really enjoying the Silver Lining! I love the writing style and the character of Alexis, her mom and sister. I hope some more males play a role in the story too - not because I dislike the interplay between mom and daughters, but because i think it would lend some balance. Doc Foster seems like an interesting story hook - are you developing that at all? Also, I really can't say how much I enjoy this one! Thanks for writing it - you're really good!
Author's Response: Thank you. To be honest I am still developing the story so Doctor Foster and the others from the hospital may or may not return. There also will be other male characters introduced at some point. Thanks for reading.
Date: 03/09/16 02:47 am Title: The First Day
Love this story and the length of each chapter. I wonder what name she will pick? Will she become a girly girl like his mother and big sister? Will she become a blonde? I'm excited for chapters to come. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you for the encouragement. Glad you enjoy it.
Date: 03/07/16 09:50 pm Title: A Long Day
Good story. I like the gradual change(it's my favorite kind). And I like that you included breast buds. That's not usually talked about. Looking forward to the other changes as well as other people's changes too.
Author's Response: Thank you. I enjoy gradual change stories myself. I have seen breast buds talked about in other stories but not often. I felt like it's something every girl has to deal with so it should also be something a guy transforming into a girl should as well. Thanks for reading.
Date: 03/07/16 11:53 am Title: A Long Day
Great story, I love the depth and the fact you justify the changes with a bit of medical reasoning. Too many hospital stories on here are so u realistic as in the person changes, then they get sent home straight away with an 'oh well, never mind' attitude! I will be looking forward to reading more :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm not a doctor so not sure how medically sound a lot of the stuff I was using in the story was but it sounded good to me. I like to keep things as real as possible even if it is fantasy. I feel it makes it easier to relate to. Thanks for reading.
Date: 03/06/16 07:20 am Title: The Morning After
Wow, Chapter 2 is brilliant - it gives more of another side of the characters, it gives good descriptions of how he starts changing and it shows that there are other changes as well.
It's got good grammar, and a very readable story.
Author's Response: Thank you. I try my best to make it clear what's happening and paint a picture. It's nice to know it's working.
Date: 03/05/16 09:27 pm Title: The First Day
This is great! Make it more fantasy-like! This story has a great start and has lots of potential.and I think if you play your cards right, it can be a hit! Just fix your comma's and it'll be perfect!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story. Sorry in advance for any issues like lack of commas. Honestly I sometimes don't know whether I should use one or not, and other times I just forget altogether.
Date: 03/05/16 06:22 pm Title: The First Day
It's an interesting start to the story and I'm really eager to find out more about this cloud.
There does seem to be a bit too much hostility towards the main character's mother and sister though, but otherwise it's a nice start.
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your feedback. I didn't see what you were talking about writing it, but I wanted the relationship between the family members to have a significant change after transformation. Perhaps I went too strongly negative in the first chapter to contrast it with later ones. Thanks for reading.