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Reviewer: Ezra Bjorn Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/09/16 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Interesting transformation because you highlight just what he's visually noticing. He's completely unaware, otherwise, of anything happening. When he hops off the couch is the first time he feels the effects of the transformation. I will be interested to see if Luke knew this would happen or not. Very curious experience.

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TG Storytime uses the eFiction engine and Vanilla discussions. Design by J6P.